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Old 03-10-2007, 04:09 PM
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Susan I thank God for thee
For looking upon my body objectively
For digging and asking questions
For your sense of humour

You're an attractive lady no doubt
The prettiest I have ever received a prescription from
Your mind well trained
Your instincts I trust

Mostly for listening I am thankful
Eye to eye and ear to ear
I can only explain my condition from what I know
I am untrained and unedu***ed in this

Susan
You are a gentle soul
I am thankful for your small hands and fingers too.

See you next time Doc
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Old 03-11-2007, 06:56 AM
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Great story!!! It was multi-sided, yet flowed into one stream.
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nice. who is Susan?
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Old 03-15-2007, 09:10 PM
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who is Susan?
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Old 03-20-2007, 03:07 PM
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I told you not to call me Susan in public...
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Old 03-22-2007, 05:55 PM
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Putting it back on
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